I will be picking at the shading for a while so any critique or suggestions would be appreciated.
Yeah, there is a large blank area, maybe some more petroglyphs.
There is some glare off the dark areas in the upper right third. It is darker in reality.
First three paragraphs of the story. Link at bottom to whole piece.
“What the hell have you done to me?” Jamie demanded, the words coming out reasonably clear despite the alteration of the physical elements involved to produce them.
“ I did what you asked and saved your life…and more, for I’ve also given you a reason for living.” Replied the old woman.
“Look at me, I’m…I’m a monster! A freak! How do you expect me to live like this? I can’t go home or dare to even be seen. I’d have been better off dead! How could this,” she said, thrusting out her paw-hand, “possibly give me a reason to live?”
Story, Please read! Thanks!
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/11929659/